oh god fifty shades of grey is truly as awful as it sounds
this is SO BAD
12 year olds write better stuff than this
I’m pretty sure I’ve written better shit than this
you guys know she originally wrote this as twilight fanfiction
u ok
Wow. Just… Wow.

(Source: peechington-marie)
Do people really think about “acclimatizing” when they’re fucking?
the author isn’t a very good writer.
I normally skim lemons in fanfics…buT THIS IS NOT WORTHY OF EVEN BEING CALLED SMUT.
Oh hey look I queued this back just before 50 Shades got super popular and I actually know what it was. Weird. I thought...